2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the development of society and advancement of human civilization,people's living would be changed by science technique.especially,we have closely connection with computer。we can't image even our life that computer will disappear one day. computer has became necessarity for our studing,entertainment and so on.there are following reasons to explain this phenomenon. firstly, with the popularity of internet,people easily can share their experience by like weibo,weixin and so on. it will make people excitement and relax,also make your netizen learn about what you are doing now. secondly,it is very convenience for people make shopping online that not require to store. on the otherhand,it is cheap than window shopping.