2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

On maintaining trust in today china,there absence trust between man.do you remmenber what a youth are faked by a old because the man take the old to hospital to a traffic ,but the youth is innocent.i want to ask why? and in recent years,the relationship in doctors and patients so badly,this is why? in my own point,the main problem that between humans is lack of trust .why ? owing to human become more and more anxiety,no time to talking with each others.so taking a conversation is so important,no matter what in parents and children ,husband and wife,boss and workers ,doctors and patients.