2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

使用了简单的从句；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；作者词汇量偏小，文章用词太过单一；请注意分段。

today, in mang families have only one child.so parents piay everythings for thier children .but,that is not really good for child's furture .in this environment。the child have not independently to deal with difficulties. parents should be help children to be independent.first,parent should be encourage child to do something that want to do.this is developent of thier hobby.when thier wrong to do something.parents should be cheer of thier,