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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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In the modern time, it has become a common phenomenon to untrust people.People always be suspicious of others without any reasons, there is less and less trust between the people, which makes me upset. There are some reasons why those people don't trust others. One obvious reason is that people have become more selfish ,they always worried about others to get better than them, so they don't share some important information with other people, but it is stupid, isn't it? Another is that some people have done a lot of harm to others for their own reason , which makes people afraid, so they can't trust others all the time. As far as I'm concerned, on maintaining trust is of great importance. If we always suspect others ,don't trust others, and don't give other people the chance to perform their sincere heart, we can't find the real friends or the partners, and we can't get success just depend on ourself. so plesae try your best to trust people around you.

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