3、这种现象可能产生的影响
表格:
1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
文中衔接词丰富;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
It can be seen from the form,nowadays,more and more people choose to travel in recently dacades about this city.In 1995,there are ten thousand people to travel,and five years later,nearly 40000 go to travel.In 2005,the number of to travel was three times than in 2000 and reached to 120000. Quate a number of factors can account for this phenomenon,but the following may be the essential ones.Forst and foremost,with the development of our society,an increasingly number of people has rich and they have the money to travel.Moreover,the advance of the traffic tools,the long distance travel has been realized.We can take plane to anywhere you like. The increasinng number of travel will cause some effects on economy,it can facilitate the development of ecomomy.Also,it can rich people's life.