2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

Nowadays,we can see more beautifully packaged when we go outside, extraordinary in the festival.What is more, all our friends would give our gift with a beautifully packaged.And the shop would also trying to suggest the constemers to buy the thing which with a beautiful packaging.For instance,the mooncakes,it is like that the packag are more expensiver than mooncakes.Also the phone would have a nice packag. I think there are some reason for excessive,The first is that we think the beautiful packag will give us more face.And it is also can be remerber and regnize by the wan who you want to pleasured.The secend is that seller would get more benifical form the packaging.The last one is that some one think the excessive packaging can highlight the stuate to himself. In my opinion,I think it is jeopardize for the envirment.It is wasting the resource.To ease the problem of this we should give up the way in excessive packaging as soon as possible.And the goverment should make a better low to restrict the phenomemon of this.So we can have an well-being tomorrw.