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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1989
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

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It can be seen from the form,nowadays,more and more people choose to travel in recently decades about this city.In 1995,there are ten thousand people to travel,and five years later,nearly 40000 go to travel.In 2005,the number of to travel was three times than in 2000 and reached to 120000. Quate a number of factors can account for this phenomenon,but the following may be the essential ones.Forst and foremost,with the development of our society,an increasingly number of people has became rich and they have the money to travel.Moreover,the advance of the traffic tools,twhich has overcome the barrier of distance so long distance travel has been realized.We can take the plane to anywhere you like. The increasing number of travel will cause some effects on the economy,it can facilitate the development of ecomomy.Also,it can rich people's life.

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