2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

It can be seen from the form,nowadays,more and more people choose to travel in recently decades about this city.In 1995,there are ten thousand people to travel,and five years later,nearly 40000 go to travel.In 2005,the number of to travel was three times than in 2000 and reached to 120000. Quate a number of factors can account for this phenomenon,but the following may be the essential ones.Forst and foremost,with the development of our society,an increasingly number of people has became rich and they have the money to travel.Moreover,the advance of the traffic tools,which has overcome the barrier of distance so long distance travel has been realized.We can take the plane to anywhere you like. The increasing number of travel will cause some effects on the economy,it can facilitate the development of ecomomy.Also,it can rich people's life.