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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4552
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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复杂句采用很棒;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

用户练习作文:

With the improvement of high technology in the modern time, the internet has effected our life in many aspects. We take lessons, watch movies and comminicate with our friends and so on, we can't leave internet in some way. It's a fact that the internet has brought much convenience to our life, but every coin has two sides, so does the internet. One obvious problem is that we spend too much time on communicating with others through internet, which make us silent in real life. Because we are addicted into a virtual world that internet make up for us, we enjoy communicating by this way, day by day, we rarely go out to play with real friends, maybe we will forget how to comminicate with real person some day. that's too terrible! As far as I'm concerned, though the internet have a lot of advantages, we must effec our time in a appropriate way. Communicating in internet can't replace the time which we spend with our friends,.Go out more, gain more.

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