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2008年专八英语作文真题:College years have prepared you for your future life

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:17浏览次数:4045
要求:
题目 College years have prepared you for your future life
说明 In a few months' time you are going to graduate from university. How do you think your college years have prepared you for your future life? Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic: What I have learned from my years at university
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分24.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化多样;作者词汇表达不够丰富,另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In a few month's later, i'm going to end my university life. I have to ask mysefl"What i have learned in the past four years?" However, seem there are no special skill that i am good at it, in my professinal knowledge, i just try to keep my eamil not fail and get the score at the end of semeter.

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