新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

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nowadays, there is a hot issue -weather games are as important for adults as they are for children? some people believe they are more important for adults, while others don't buy the theory, as for me, i perfer they are both important for adults and children. now,plwase allow me explain my view through the following brife three reasons. firstly, no matter adults or children, they are undergo many different kind of stress, they wanna a way to relax, and games are the best choice,they will feel good after do some games,such as play chess, hite-and-find.secondly, games can promote the relationship between people,and also help people be awared of the important of team-work. last but not the least, people can keep a healthy outlook on life throuh some intellect games. while,every coin has two sides, some games are not good for people, such as gumble and computer games,if you are dying for them, they will distructe your life,so keep away from those bad things. all in all do some mediate games can help us ,so i think games are important to both adults and children.