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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2995
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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请作者增加词汇丰富度,加强拼写检查;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;采用了一些简单的从句。

用户练习作文:

No one can deny the importance of preparation when you want to start a project.As Lincoln said,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,I will spend,the first hour sharpening the axe."That means that you should prepare for your goal and makefull of your facility.You can'tbreak up your project because the breakdown of your facility. In my opinion,it is not enough.Making good preparation is not only setting the purpose of project and making a plan,but also can we take all circustance into consideration.In addition,we can't emphasize persistance too much.A good attitude will lead us to a success way. Most of all,if you look forward to achieve success,you should know what your goal.And it is waste of time and energy doing a project without a plan.Be confident,and insist on what you want,you will work it out.

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