2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success
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No one can deny the importance of preparation when you want to start a project.As Lincoln said,"Give me six hours to chop down a tree,I will spend,the first hour sharpening the axe."That means that you should prepare for your goal and makefull of your facility.You can'tbreak up your project because the breakdown of your facility. In my opinion,it is not enough.Making good preparation is not only setting the purpose of project and making a plan,but also can we take all circustance into consideration.In addition,we can't emphasize persistance too much.A good attitude will lead us to a success way. Most of all,if you look forward to achieve success,you should know what your goal.And it is waste of time and energy doing a project without a plan.Be confident,and insist on what you want,you will work it out.