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Write a passage in about 100 words with the help of the following points about Zhanghua’s life change. The first sentence has been given.
Zhanghua as a child
Zhuanghua now
used to have much time
used to spend a lot of time playing games with his friends
used to watch TV or chat with his grandma in the evening
used to go to concerts with his father.
Is too busy
gets up early and stays in school all day.
hasn't any more time to play games with his
does his homework and goes to bed late,
hardly has time for concerts.
misses the old days.
Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years.
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Zhanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years. When he was a child, he used to have much time. He used to spend a lot of time playing games with his friends. He used to watch TV with his grandma in the evening. Sometimes, he went to concerts with his father. But now, he is too busy. He gets up early and stays in school all day. He hasn't any more time to play games with his good friends.And he also hardly has time for concerts. He said he missed the old days very much.
