2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Along with the rapid development of our society ,computer becomes almost a necessity in our daily life,it plays a more and more important role in life,it is really an mirror of social progress in some degree .however,every coin has its two sides,there are still many people who hold the view that computer makes some trouble to us. You see,computer was used by us normal person ,it was invented for calculating the big numbers,as time went by,it was used by chemistry and physics and so on ,then in our life.It seems that it can almost solve all the problems and send us all kinds of information if we want .On the other hand ,people who want to do bad activities get a huge and helpful access,we all know that there are so many mendacious messages on the internet. At another aspect,computer takes too much our times and we nearly have no time to pay attention to learn the other knowledge .In my opinion ,computer is just a tool,use it but not to be used.