初中英语命题作文真题演练(97):华南虎

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An animal in danger---South China tiger Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious.Because of too much hunting, South China tiger is endanger.To protect South China tiger,the goverment sets up Baishanzu National Nature Reserve. Long time ago, there is very few tigers. But from now on, the number of the tigers has raised about 30 to 60. Animals are important for us.How to protect them? Confronted with, we should tale a series of effective measures to solve it. For one thing, we should follow the rules. If there is no trade,there will no kill. For another, animals are people's friends. It's our duty to protect them.