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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

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With the development of economy, the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that person to person become more and more difficult to keep trust. According to a recent opinion poll, in the past few years quite a number of people have been cheated by friends or colleagues, which caused their heart injured. Cheating is become a serious atmosphere caused by some person who used fraudulent ways to earn much money. According to my experience, one day i went to a fruit store to buy some oranges. When i gave it to the saleman, he cheated me that it is three kilos. To be honst, it is only two kilograms. I felt very anger when i know that. However, there are also numerous people keep to trust. For one thing, people believe that the good person is more than cheaters. They always insist on their mind that trust is the best traditional characteristic in China. For another, only trust others people, can harmonious socity be established in few years. As far as I'm concerned, we should keep the enthusiasm for maintaining trust and try our best to trust anyone in future.

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