2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Nowadayas , computer is becoming one of the most imporant parts in our daily life ,especislly for young people Many people like surfing the internet ,shopping online and chat with their friends or family members by computers ,what's more , they can gain a lot of useful informations what are benefitful for their work or study . As we all konw ,computers really make our life more convinient in several aspects , however , it is essential for us to have the conscious to play the computer . for students , we shouldn't be addicted to the computer games ,and adults alse pay attention to the burns in the computer . one cion has two sides, we not only to enjoy the benefit of the computer but also to avoid the harm to us . Only in this way ,can we make the most use of the computer .