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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;请注意分段。
In my opinion,it is not a good way to save money through these ways such as collecting coupons and looking for group-buy deals .As we all know,all these so-called cheap beneficial deals are means of vendors adopted to attract customers . In reality, we don't get any benefits from them.From another aspect,we need't save money through these ways but make more money by our abilities .Only when we earn more money,can we spend money relaxedly and didn't feel guilty.