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Who is the big man of a chinese family nowadays,father,mother,or kids?The answer mostly is kids,especially the youngest one.The chinese parents so love their little angle,sometimes overdo it.Indulge your children's every whim is not really a good way to breed them up,because they will never learn to be independent. There are some advices for chinese parents:Firstly,don't do all things for children even some little thing they can do it by themself,such as washing clothes,cleaning room,give a chance to let children deal with them alone.Secondly,don't keep your children in your arms all day long,let them go out and play with some neighbour's kids or their classmate,so they could build their own friendship,and see what other kids doing,they could learn something from each other. Thirdly,if your children find it difficult to do something,encourage your children to face it,help them find a way to get that done,not simply take control and do it yourself,your children will loss a chance to building up their confidence.
