高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown in my memory，there are many green trees around the hometown，the fish was playing in the beautiful water,the house was simple and the road was narrow,the people who is hard working not rich,this all the past of my hometown.simplely,but also fill with authentic happiness.many years ago,there is a huge changing in my hometown,everywhere you can see the tall building and various car driving in the road.with the high technology developing in indurstry that cause of bad affect to environment which is trees decline and many fish die.in my opinion,the goverment should take a good measure to deal with this phenomenon