2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

In our dialy life,we often notice a phenomenon of On Excessive Packaging,which has made persons feel angry.It seems that everyone should do that. However,What cause it?Percent of 80% people who are business or sellsmen agree that,but aims to earn much money .Besides,more people like childrent are willing to get it ,so their parents have to buy it for kid. So i can get some advices to solve this phenomenon.