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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication with internet is used in the globle,it makes our world not further.we can make friends with other countries,it is never happened in history.however,at same time,it takes many disadvantage. the youth like communication online every day and every time,even every minitues,thus they dislike take a conversation with people in real world,particularly their parents and lovers.it leads contradict each other,such as quarel,divorce,complain and even suicide.for these things,i think we could sit down to talk with each other for solve our problem.it is important that face to face for take conversation than talking online,it could add trust and emotion.and talking on qq or msm is so cold and stranger.

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