初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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my name is Zhang Hua.I'm a middle school student.I like this programme very much,especially English song. While I am tired or busy in studying,I always turn on the radio and listen to this programme.I have learned many things from this programme.For example,I have learned how to write beautiful sentences,how to use pretty words and how to communicate with foreigners. My favourite song is Taylor Swift's Back to December.When I first time heared this song,I think it's very nice.It can let my hair down and I'll feel very comfortable. I'm appriciate for this programme.It's fantastic.