初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

My name is Zhang Hua.I'm a middle school student.I like this programme very much,especially English song. While I am tired or busy in studying,I always turn on the radio and listen to this programme.I have learned many things from this programme.For example,I have learned how to write beautiful sentences,how to use pretty words and how to communicate with foreigners. My favourite song is Taylor Swift's Back to December.When I first time heard this song,I think it's very nice.It can let my hair down and I'll feel very comfortable. I'm appreciate for this programme.It's fantastic.