初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

My name is Zhang Hua.I'm a middle school student.I like this programme very much,especially English song. While I am tired or busy in studying,I always turn on the radio and listen to this programme.I have learned many things from this programme.For example,I have learned how to write beautiful sentences,how to use pretty words and how to communicate with foreigners. My favourite song is Taylor Swift's Back to December.When I first time heard this song,I think it's very nice.Even though I am very weary,it can let my hair down and I'll feel very comfortable. I'm appreciating for this programme.It's fantastic.