2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping With the development of modern economy,people have more and more wealth.Nowadays,online shopping has been a fashion. Online shopping is a pretty convenient way of shopping.As far as I am concerned,every coin has it's two sides.Online shopping has many advantages,online shopping is very convenient,and the things are very cheap.However，it also has some disadvantages.for example,we may be cheated online shopping.And some things are not very good,but it is also described very good. I can give some suggestions on online shopping.If you want to purchase some cheap things,you can choose online shopping.The most important point is that you can't full believe online shopping.