2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文中用词稍显贫乏，另外请注意单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Nowdays shopping on the Internet has become more fashion. More and more people choose shopping online. So shopping on the Internet is popular with many people. it has many advantages. It's very convenient for people. If you want to buy something,you can shop on the online fast. In addition,the prices on the Internet is cheaper than the stores. But it allso has some disadvantages. You may buy a fake on the lonline. So i suggest if you buy anything on the online ,you must be careful.