2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多。

If you could find a path with no obstacles,it probably dosen't lead anywhere,in other words,we will meet many obstacles on the way success.But standing up to obstacles and doing something about them,we will find they haven't the half strengths we think they have,we have to accept whatever comes and the most important is that meet them with the best we have to give. There was something happen on my body 4 years ago when I was a senior high school student,I failed of my entrance and I was miserable and gloomy.I thought I cann't go to college,I couldn't have a good job in the future,but it is due to my friends'bountiful free gifts that I also have my share of warmth and happiness life,I tried to do something that my parents don't think I can do,such as english,finally,I do it and same time I found that they haven't so difficult as I think they have.I defeat the obstacle and got successful. On the way to success,we will meet many obstacles,overcome it and we can do,we must do.