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Working Hard and Keeping Fit I have a best friend, his name is Chen hua. These days he have changed a lot. Because he understands what important the health have. At past. He always stays up late at night and never take part in sports and school activities. And then. He felt strange one day. What a pity! He had a bad cold. He can't study and just stay at bad to sleep. The doctor says that he must have more and more exercise to in good health. After that, he often runs to school and rides bike on weekdays. The doctor says that keep doing these. He will be better soon.
