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This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo with my parents. I saw many interesting things here. There were many visitors, they gave food to monkeys and played with tigers. Animals and people get on well with each other. Now, I know that we should be friendly towards them. It is important to protect environment. We should no littering in there. And to my surprise, now everyone knows the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.