牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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This weekend I visited Beijing Wildlife Zoo with my parents. I saw many interesting things here. There were many visitors, they were fooding on monkeys and playing with tigers. Thay were all happy. Animals and people get on well with each other. Now, I know that we should be friendly towards them. It is important to protect environment. We should no litter in there. And to my surprise, now everyone knows the importance of protecting the wildlife because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.