初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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No.16 Middle School Beijing April 30,2007 Dear sir, My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your music programme. I like the programme very much, especially the English songs. As a student, I'm busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your programme. I've also learned many English words from these songs. Of all the English songs, I like "We Are Never Ever Getting Back Tegether" best. Would you please send me the words of this song? Yours sincerely Zhang Hua