初中英语命题作文真题演练(91):音乐节目

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No.16 Middle School Beijing April 30,2007 Dear sir, My name is Zhang Hua. I'm a middle school student. I like listening to music, so I often listen to your music programme. I like the programme very much, especially the English songs. As a student, I'm busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your programme. I've also learned many English words from these songs. Of all the English songs, I like "We Are Never Ever Getting Back Tegether" best. Would you please send me the words of this song? Thank you very much. By the way. Could you please give me your phone number? I can call you if I want to know something about music. Yours sincerely Zhang Hua