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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文中衔接词丰富;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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Computer and Man Nowadays computer becomes popular among pepole in daily life.It renders us to believe there exist many problems that must be dealed with by computer. Meanwhile some doubt if it will replace man.Now let's talk about it. There is no doubt that computer can do a number of things which are complex or difficilt.However,It is a kind of machine on earth so it won't be as same as our brain.What's more,computer is controlled by the programme so that mistakes could appear. In my view,although it is advanced,it is absolutely can't be our brain.

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