2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；请注意分段。

In modern society , technology has become one momentum to develop our current economy , especially the computer . undoubtedly, without cyber,we even do not know how to live , why we live , what we live for. obviously, computers which is considered our companion always have dominated individual life and become everyone's best friend.meanwhile, more and more people pay attention to this phenomenon. whether internet is good for us or not arouse a fierce debate.