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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;文中衔接词丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

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Computer and Man Nowadays computer becomes popular among people in daily life.It renders us to believe that there exist many problems which must be solved by computer. Meanwhile some doubt if it will replace with man.Now let's talk about it. There is no doubt that computer can do a number of things which are complex or difficult.However,It is a kind of machine on earth so it won't be the same as our brain.What's more,computer is controlled by the programme so that mistakes could appear. In my view,although it is advanced,computer is absolutely can't be the same as our brain. Conquering the universe, discovering new things, explaining mysteruiys phenomena puzzling us at present are all made possible by computer.

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