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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear David, I learn about that you are looking for a Chinese acquaintance by reading a notice on the internet.Owing to this,It will easier for you to acquire Chinese language and culture. I'm extremely glad to hear that,and I am determined to found friendships with you.I will try my best to help you learn Chinese. Follows are my thoughts.Firstly,I can chat with you in Chinese on the internet.Not only can it assist your Chinese,but also we can found our friendships.Moreover,you can ask me for some problems that you don't appreciate.Last but not least,I want to invite you to my house.All of my family members will salute you. I am looking forward to receiving from you.I am expected to recognize you as soon as feasible.