初中英语命题作文真题演练(89):生活离不开水

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We can't alive without water.Aw we know,the water suitable to drink's amount is lesser than before day by day.The pollution episodes is serious。We have do something to protect it so that we can alive.Not only protect water,but also advocate the water reuse. If everyone can pay attention to it and put into action,our environment will be more beautiful.