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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? the phenomenon that parents helps their child do everything is more popular,with How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent,we have a discuss.now i will show you the consequences. some people think the best way is give them the truth life.they think the child can't independent because their parents helps them do everything,so that they can't have a better life by themselves.the quickly way is keep them do everything by themselves. others think that we should give the child more time or not extra course.they learn in school all day,they also need to go to cram school.which all lead them have no time to things by themselves. as far as my consirded,i think the children can't independent is a gross problem.wo should slove this problem quickly.let us give the child truth life,keep them can live by themselves.