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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；希望作者学术词汇的使用能更熟练，另外要认真检查拼写。
As the cleverest spicy of primates, human being has always been proud of mind and capability in dealing with relationships such as those between human being and natural, among people all over the world. So, some years ago, some optimists thought that human being could make progress in every area, now, years after this assumption, if we examine the past century, what's the truth? It is certain that we realized many dreams before, for example, people can talk with his/her parents via mobile at a range of 100,000 miles away, people can dive into 7 kms under sea level to detect minerals, people can also construct a 3-D model of our brain and virtulize its function. Yes, indeed, we have made great progress in scientific and technologies rhelm. It is certain that Chinese government are leading a dramatic anti-corruption activity and correct erroneous attributions of politics system, it is certain that we are experiencing great change of politics, especially it is towards the right direction in our mind. However, when we buy things on dotcoms, we can see that Ukraine was buled by Russian, we can see children of peasants can't enjoy same education as those counterparts in cities, many people have to resort complaining upwards to try to resolve their unfair problems. Yes, on my mind, human being's good concousnes has not many improvement, vise versa, it steps backwards. Actually, most people always value their material interest but ignore their mind or spirit purification, those facts are just reflection of this tendancy. In this tendancy, people swall the bitter fruit cultivated by themselves. No spirit, materials might cause people's unhappiness, especially in a tyrany country in which officials never think the people as important.
