内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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I understand your company new product of No. 5670 in the exhibition held in New York on the date of Dec. 15th to 22rid ,and I was very interested in it. Please send us a price list and an instruction. Thank you for your attention and we are expecting to establish business relationship with you. We are looking forward to your early reply! Yours partner