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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication Nowadays,with the development of computer,more and more people tend to get in torch with others on the internet.However,just as the coin has two sides,communicating on internet also has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand,communicating on internet is of great convenience so that we can get the information we want quickly.What's more,we can save a lot of time to do other important things.The most important thing is we communicate with others whenever we need.On the other hand,communicating on the internet sometimes is dangerous that we may cheated by some illegal activities.The information we get from the internet sometimes are not true so it will lead us to a wrong way.Off course,communicating on the internet can make the distance between both friends so away. As far as i am concerned,as we person,we should brush up our eyes to identify the things which is right.It's essential for us to make a safe communication on the internet.

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