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The impact of the internet on interpersonal communication Nowadays,with the development of computer,more and more people tend to get in torch with others on the internet.However,just as the coin has two sides,communicating on internet also has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand,communicating on internet is of great convenience so that we can get the information we want quickly.What's more,we can save a lot of time to do other important things.The most important thing is we communicate with others whenever we need.On the other hand,communicating on the internet sometimes is dangerous that we may cheated by some illegal activities.The information we get from the internet sometimes are not true so it will lead us to a wrong way.Off course,communicating on the internet can make the distance between both friends so away. As far as i am concerned,as we person,we should brush up our eyes to identify the things which is right.It's essential for us to make a safe communication on the internet.
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