2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

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Should parents send their kids to art classes? If you observe around carefully you will find many kids are send to art classes in the weekend. But is it good idea? Different people have different idea. This is what them thought. The majority of parents are support it. The reason is kids participate art classes will increase their knowledge and form some hobbies,of course it improves kids’culture. Meanwhile, though participate art classes kids fell relax from heavy homework. Some other parents have opposite idea. Them belive send kids to art classes will waste many time to study and then kids will get bad grades, at last it will influence kids to go to which college. As concerned as i am think, parents send kids to art classes is a good point. Because it make kids more active and improve the ability of creative. But parents do it should property or they will get opposite effect.