2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,computer plays an more and more important role in our daily life .We would not image if computer had escaped from our occupation and study .Nevertheless anything has two sides,both good and bad .Now there are follows two different. Firstly,it is obvious that computer has been taken so many benefits to our life every corner ,such as ,for its help,there are more efficiency ,it can not be only save our time,but it also take time to do more useful things.Secondly ,many line store are opened due to the development of internet and computer,especially E-commerce has been made great progress on it,lucky that unemployment rate is decreased sharply .But at the same time,bad effect is coming ,too.Such as, youth are addicted to playing game online,it makes parents sad and helpless ,which wastes their time and unfavorable influence on study. To sum,as far as I am concerned,as long as we can well use its benefits,computer will more important.