题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;请注意分段。
In modern society, technology has become one momentum to develop our current economy, especially the computer. Undoubtedly, without cyber,we even do not know how to live, why we live, what we live for. Obviously, computers which is considered our companion always have dominated individual life and become everyone's best friend.Meanwhile, more and more people pay attention to this phenomenon. Whether a group of computers are good for us or not arouse a fierce debate.