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假如你是李明，你的班里来了一位英国交换生Paul。他在和你的交谈中表示在中国学习压力很大。请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
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Dear Paul, I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. I really want to help you deal with this problem。My suggestion are as follows。 As far as I am concerned it is wise to turn to your teachers or classmates for help，which will reduce your stress better。Besides, think more about what you have done and how much process you make rather than caring the marks too much。In addition，tell youself you can do it。Just believe yourself！In your spare tme you are supposed to do some exercises，which will reduce your stressment and help you have a sound sleep。 At last I hope you will good at your study。 Best wishes!
