2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题TASK2

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Can Ads bring positive effects for dairly life? For more than a decade the issue has divided the public,and even today it still sparks bitter controversy among the whole society. Some people say that plent of evidence have proved Ads contribute the development of commodity maket. It is undeniable that a good adversiting's ability of attracting customers and increase sales. In addition, adverstings can provide more opportunities for people to satisfy the needs of customers and lead the trend. Meanwhile, advertisings also boost competition between manufactors, hereby, most price is reasonable instead of monopoly. Yet, some people believe that the public's life is on the brink of collapse due to advertisings. Initially, advertisings interrupt most of TV programs when people sit in front of screens, which lead TV audiences to detest these episodes so that they change channels all the time. Furthermore, most advertisings always contain exaggerative and false elements to attract more people. Finally, some ads also appeal the public to pursue a comfortable, luxury,and comparison life, which is not only increasing the financial burden of family but also spreading social unhealthy tendency. In sum, personally, my view is that ads bring us many effects which are visual arts, including the novel innovative designs and background musics, although there are several shortages. I believe that the government has the right to set down relavent laws to supervise advertisings to maintain harmonious society. Only through this way can ads enrich our life.