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As a student , I have sports every day though I am busy with my study. Because doing sports can not only make me become much healthier and stronger but also bring me happiness. At weekends , I always go swimming with my dad. On weekdays , I usually play ball games with my classmates. We all feel happy and pleased. When I am upset , I will have sports too , because it can make forget the unhappiness and fell much better. From the sports spirit , I’ve learned that I should be brave when I am in trouble and insist on trying my best. In brief , I love doing sports. It brings me much happiness!
