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Sports change my life My name is Li Hui. I’m a student of Sunshine Secondary School. In the past, I had no time to take exercise because of too much homework. We felt tired and stressed. But now our school makes sure that each student has one-hour sports activities every day. Our school is holding all kinds of games. I take an active part in them. My health and study have changed a lot. I become healthier than before. I feel energetic. I also have great progress in my study.
