文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling With the development of society,the communication of the world are more and more intimate.And the languages are pretty important in the process,English is also a very important language.In all,many countries begin to learn English. In all subjects,English is a pretty useful language.However,it seems to appear some bad problems.Many students not give much attention to English spelling.What reasons lead to the situation happens?It may be that they think we are Chinese,and they feel that learning English is too difficult.And the most important reason is that learning English will spend their much free time. As far as I am concerned,the situation is so bad that we must change it.Our country should give more attention to English,and the students should know the importance of spelling.